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Monday, 11 April 2016

T.O.K essay 2 - “In gaining knowledge, each area of knowledge uses a network of ways of knowing.“


Grade awarded: 8+/10

“In gaining knowledge, each area of knowledge uses a network of ways of knowing.”

The tittle suggests that knowledge is “gained” through the movement of knowledge from a personal sphere to a shared sphere. Another way of interpreting the title may be thinking about the academic research which leads to the production of knowledge or even the process of discovering new ideas or views. The definition of “network” can be interpreted in many senses and be approached in a number of ways, in a Theory of Knowledge perspective, a network can be defined as a way of sharing a series of functional needs, which can be used and lead to both positive and negative outcomes. A network is invaluable in ways of knowing (e.g. sense perception and reason), each area of knowledge has its own relatable way of knowing, thus there may be some emphasis being placed upon some WoKs in preference to others, nevertheless, a network might create come distortion, changing the message being shared on. I will be considering the following two areas of knowledge: Ethics and Arts, taking into account the influence of some of the 8 ways of knowing: language, sense perception, reason, faith, memory, imagination, intuition and emotions.
The first area of knowledge to be discussed will be Ethics. Ethics is the study of morals, it is the moral principles governing or influencing conduct. In this area of knowledge I will reference 3 ways of knowing: sense perception, reason and faith. Sense perception (seeing, smelling, touching, hearing and tasting) is a way of knowing through first-hand knowledge – easier to believe; it is in constant use and is always needed. However, everyone interprets senses differently, it is not reliable and it might not be a true representation of the outside world (optical illusion). Thus, sense perception is subjective, in order to make good ethical judgements based on your surroundings it is required to link reason.
Reasoning enables us to challenge different concepts as well as different ideas, it allows us to find what is true or false as it uses facts to come up with reasonable and logical answers. In spite of this, there are weaknesses: reasoning rejects emotions and it is not a solution to underlying problems. It can also be effected by bias or ignorance, therefore it does not provide definite answers, proving suggestions and different ideas. This links to ethics because in order to form an ethical position, reason is used to assess the outcomes of our actions, and arrive at a fair judgement about moral behaviour. Nonetheless, reason might vary from faith to faith, different beliefs have distinct views of the world. For example: Jihadis are trained to neglect reason but instead are trained to highly esteem their faith in Jihad, which makes them believe that God will promise them paradise as a recompense for acts of martyrdom. On the other hand, in the western countries, the main religion is Christianity, which is the faith that both Hell and Heaven exist after death and in order to go to Heaven people must be good to one another, otherwise they will end up in Hell. Therefore, their reasoning with regard to faith.
Faith is the complete trust or confidence in someone or something, it makes people feel included and united in common beliefs and goals, as part of a group. It can shape people and it can be universal and individual to cultures and countries, however, its limitations outweigh its strengths; our beliefs are not always true, it mostly involves other people’s ideas and “faith is belief that rejects the need for justification” – Oxford Course Companion 2013. This links to ethics in many ways, one of them being the concept of “human flourishing” – living well and therefore having a general agreement between humans so that everyone is happy. It also acts as a valuable moral compass in order to create some sort of agreement and understanding – this is universal. Then again, we also must think of the faith in cultures that are not ethically correct, e.g. Satanism and Jihad, leading to fundamentalism and extremism.
The second area of knowledge to be discussed will be the Arts. The Arts is the expression of creative skill which contains a meaning and a message. In this area of knowledge I will reference 3 ways of knowing: emotion, sense perception and language. Emotion is a strong feeling, distinguished from reasoning or knowledge, it is an instinctive feeling, such as joy or anger.  Emotion is a very strong and powerful WoK, it can interfere with how we view the world and how we interpret the Arts. For example: the poem “Tabacaria” by Álvaro de Campos, based on my emotions, is a piece of art. In my opinion, to write is to create something meaningful, to express our emotions through words. I think that poems in particular are a much expressive and truthful way of doing so. This might have been passed on to me by shared knowledge through culture, however, I identify myself with this poem because I share the feelings and the perception of the world which this poem transpires. Therefore, I know that this is art because of my individual experience, reflection, perspective and therefore the emotions that this agglomerate of things have led to. However, emotion works well side by side with sense perception, which helps create emotions based on our perception of the World.
Sense perception as referred previously, is a way of knowing through first-hand knowledge, as a result this is very helpful when coming to decide what position we stand, what emotions and feelings we have towards something or someone. When viewing an artwork, sense perception is the first WoK you are recalling upon – using your primal instinct (sight, smell, taste, touch and sound). It helps us to formulate meaning to what we are being faced with, even if it is unfamiliar, we try to make some sense of it based on our surroundings. Then, we take on this ambiguous understanding and we build on it by drawing on shared knowledge we have come across from previous experiences, coming to a final interpretation of the work of art in an individual and distinct way. However, there might be some complications with this: humans have a tendency to be bias, and so confirmation bias can be a problem – our interpretation of the artwork can be perceived only in ways that fit into our preconceived ideas, creating an avoidance towards new concepts. The Willful Ignorance is another obstruction; it is the idea that we refuse to look at new evidence, clinging to our biased perspectives – when viewing art, instead of considering different perspectives and being open to new interpretations, we jump to the viewpoint which relates the most to what we are familiar with. Even though sense perception helps us make some sense of our surroundings, it might be one of the biggest human flaws, causing us to be ignorant of the changing world around us. In order to minimise the possible setbacks this might create, language is another WoK which works best with sense perception. Language is influenced by what we see, even if it written or heard, passed on by shared knowledge or gained through personal knowledge.
Language is the method of human communication, either spoken, written or gestural, consisting of the use of words in a structure and conventional way or symbols, gestures and sounds. Being a bilingual individual and an I.B student, language is one of the WoK which I am constantly using and being confronted with. It has made me reflect on the positive and negative factors and as also made me more and more passionate about this way of communication, which is constantly changing forms and in constant evolution. Language always has a purpose, it is adaptable and usually specific to each country – means countries can retain their individuality. Arguably, translations will never capture the true meaning of a text and the fact that there is not a universal language can induce misunderstandings and give rise to difference of opinions. “By words one transmits thoughts to another; by means of art, one transmits feelings” – Leo Tolstoy. Arts can carry messages and therefore simply contain a language, but as Tolstoy says: art is the language of emotions. Instead of thinking of Art and Language as separate concepts, we should think representational and abstraction, in the end, language is the art of communication, even if abstract and different to the ones we are accustomed.
As we can see, Art can be very influential, to the point of shaping our society and communicate ideas and feelings that appeal to our senses, emotion, language, etc.  In spite of this, there are ethical concerns and implications referent to the arts. Which makes me think: is it necessary for art to go against moral and ethical conventions in order to be considered “good” art? Where does the freedom of expression end? When considering art’s ethical implications some people would argue that we must look at its aesthetic value, if it has a moral and educative role, if it provokes emotions and if it widens our awareness that there are other equally valid perspectives in the world. The following theories of ethics help establish different moral principles: ‘duty ethics’ states that it is our duty and obligation to do certain things and focuses on intention of actions. On the other hand, ‘utilitarianism’ has the aim to maximise the world’s happiness and focusses on the consequences of actions. In conclusion, each areas of knowledge have their own invaluable “network”, the way in which one is interpreted determines the way in which knowledge is gained. In order to understand Ethics in Arts is necessary to use that network, either gained by shared or personal knowledge.


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T.O.K essay 2 - “In gaining knowledge, each area of knowledge uses a network of ways of knowing.“ - Plan

Intoduction


  • Define "network" and what does the use of this word imply?
  • What are you going to consider in this essay?
  • Which two areas of knowledge (from Ethics, The Arts and History)


Body


Cross reference your two areas of knowledge with the 8 WOKs: language, emotion, faith, reason, faith, memory, intuition, sense perception and imagination


E.g:


Ethics
  • The way others communicate with me both verbally and non-verbally helps shape my moral knowledge. Anger and praise help me to know that my moral reality is somewhat dependent on others’ reactions.
  • I can imagine what a world where violence and theft are tolerated would be like, and therefore I know that they are immoral.
  • Emotion; do we learn to tell the difference between right and wrong because of the way doing good or doing bad makes us feel?
  • I can remember a teacher telling me “God first, others next and yourself last”
  • Do we know what moral reality  is because we use reason as a way of knowing? If I do this, then this will happen, and this makes me choose a course of action? (consequentialist)


Area of knowledge 1:
Area of knowledge 2:

Which ways of knowing are important in each?
Why are some ways of knowing more reliable than others?
Which ways of knowing interlink with another and goes this make accurate gaining of knowledge more reliable?

Compare the two areas of knowledge and the ways of knowing they rely on.
Differences and why?
Similarities and why?

Conclusion

Is there ever a case where one way of knowing is enough?
To what extent do you agree with the tittle and why?



March 2016 essay - Soil (the pedosphere)


The pedosphere can be defined as “that shell or layer of the Earth in which soil forming processes occur” – Bates and Jackson, 1980.

The pedosphere, being the foundation of the Earth, develops by interacting between the hydrosphere - the  water cycle moves through the soil by infiltration and water may evaporate from the surface ; the atmosphere - the atmosphere may contain particulate matter that is deposited on the soils ; the biosphere - plants in the biosphere may extract nutrients from the soils and dead plants may end up forming part of the soil and the lithosphere – rocks in the lithosphere weather to form soils, and soils at depth and pressure. The pedosphere acts as a moderator of chemical and biochemical flux into and out of the previously mentioned systems.

The mineral portion of soil can be divided into three particles based on size, two of them being: sand and clay.  Sandy soils can be made out of rock fragments which contain many minerals e.g.: SiO2, there can be slightly brown, yellow or red, as a result of iron and aluminium oxides. Due its size, sand particles have a relatively low surface area thus have low water holding capacity. Soils with predominance of this fraction are considered to be non-cohesive - are more likely to be deficient in humidity in dry periods and so are low in nutrient storage capacity, primary production but high in air soil. On the other hand, clay soils have a large surface area therefore presenting a higher capacity of water/minerals absorption. This means that the particles are very united and tend to exhibit high plasticity. These are high in nutrient storage capacity, medium low in primary production but low in air space. Soil properties such as contraction and expansion, plasticity, water retention capacity, soil resistance and chemical adsorption elements are dependent on the type and amount of clay in the soil.

“The North American Prairies and commercial farming
Salinity, soil erosion and loss of soil fertility were recurrent problems. In order to stop these, farmers built snow fences or barriers which enabled snowdrifts to pile up which provide water that they then melt in – managing to reduce salinity. And to reduce erosion, contour ploughing and strip cropping was used.”


(could be continued)

Saturday, 16 January 2016

"Voces Inocentes" - critica

GENERO: Drama/Guerra

País: México

“Voces Inocentes” es una pelicula mexicana dirigida por Luis Mandoki que transcurre durante la guerra civil salvadoreña en 1980. Estrenada el 16 de septiembre de 2004, se basa en la infancia del escritor salvadoreño Oscar Torres.

Una voz en el inicial de un niño: “Tengo mucha sed. Me duelen los pies. Tengo piedras en el zapato. Seguro que nos van a matar… ¿Por qué nos quieren matar sino hicimos nada?”.



Así comienza la película, considerada fundamental para el entendimiento del dolor que causan las guerras, y enfocado en este caso a los niños soldados: Voces Inocentes. Usando la visión de un niño de 11 años, Chava (Carlos Padilla), enredado por terribles circunstancias,  nos muestra su vivencia por entre un Mundo decadente cuando tiene que convertirse en el “hombre de la casa”, después de su padre los abandonara en plena guerra civil. Chava es el contraste a la violencia que se vive por la guerrilla y también nos muestra que es posible existir amor, cuando se enamora por su hermosa compañera de clase Cristina Maria, y siente el amor de su madre Kella, que le ha dado el coraje para mantenerse firme y seguir con un corazón puro y un espirito libre.

Aunque esta película sea bastante fuerte y trágica, me gusto muchísimo. Todas las actuaciones son sublimes, Carlos Padilla (Chava) lo hizo muy bien así como sus compañeros y su primero amor, Xuna Primus (Cristina Maria) y su hermana Ana Paulina Cáceres Monroy (Rosita), que completaran la historia de una forma muy rica. Leonor Varela (Kella), también hice un trabajo estupendo, demostrando la lucha diaria y el sufrimiento de las madres de los niños salvadoreños que corrían peligro a todo el instante. Gustavo Muñoz, el Padre hizo  una excelente interpretación y no solo afirmo lo que la población estaba pasando pero también demostró la posición de la iglesia en la sociedad. Sin embargo, la guerra civil salvadoreña fue una cruel y desdeñable guerra que tuvo como protagonistas a dos bandos, el FMLN y el gobierno de El Salvador. Ambos bandos hicieron cosas espantosas, ambos se atacaron mutuamente usando el terrorismo como arma y secuestraban niños para hacer su trabajo sucio, pero esta película coloca un de los bandos (el gobierno) como el lado malvado y el otro (FMLN) como el lado de los buenos.


Esta película es buena, muy buena, sin embargo como documento histórico me parece ser manipulador y un poco irrespetuoso para la población del El Salvador. Otra de las mayores críticas de la película es que los personajes no hablan con acento salvadoreño y no representan la cultura del país. A pesar de eso, “Voces Inocentes” se ve así tal cual porque es la historia contada por Oscar Torres, quien cuando fue niño vio y conto de su punto de vista, y por haber tenido su tío en la parte de los FMLN los vio como buenos. Sea como sea, la película ha recibido inúmeros premios y críticas positivas. El director, Luis Mandoki, también ha dirigido otras grandes películas, entre ellas: When a Man Loves a Woman, Message In a Bottle, entre otras. Todo esto para decir que “Voces Inocentes” es una película con muchas virtudes y con muchos aspectos interesantes que toda la gente debería tener conocimiento aunque no represente la realidad en totalidad. 

Mi voto: 7.5/10

Word count: 555
Grade: 6

¿Cuáles son las ventajas y desventajas de la tecnología para los niños?

El siglo XXI es un siglo dominado por las tecnologías. Es casi imposible evitar que los niños no tengan cualquier contacto con estas, a la corta o a la larga se les darán la cara. Por supuesto la tecnologia, que es algo bueno, que nos proporciona una vida mejor y promueve el contacto y las relaciones personales. Por otro lado, utilizarlas a una temprana edad tiene sus ventajas y desventajas. En España, el uso de las tecnologías entre los niños de 6 y 14 años, se estima tener habido un aumento de 40%, en solamente dos años. Este aumento puede ser debido a la introducción de juegos electrónicos, teléfonos móviles, ordenadores portátiles, televisores…lo que sea! La proliferación de la tecnología lleva los niños a crear un vínculo muy fuerte con la llave para el futuro – la tecnología.

Así como la derrama económica que los niños producen a la industria de electrónicos y juguetes, las nuevas tecnologías desarrollan en los chiquitines destrezas visio-espaciales, los ayudan a adaptarse a los requisitos del Mundo actual. El contacto con la tecnología promueve el crecimiento y desenvolvimiento de los pequeños, ofrece mayor desarrollo de aptitudes mentales y motrices y hace con que las materias en la escuela sean más atractivas y de aprendizaje fácil. Y no se olvide que es mucho más práctico cargar un móvil o un ordenador portátil, que libros pesados e aburridos.


Por otro lado, 30% de los niños que se han rendido a las tecnologías, han admitido que la  principal razón por lo que recorren a estas, es porque se sienten solos y no saben cómo hacer amistades. El refugio que la tecnología proporciona es algo perjudicial en la mayoría de las veces, pues no promueve la interacción social y disminuye la habilidad de hacer nuevos amigos, causando problemas de crecimiento e interacción. El uso prolongado de computadoras pueda causar problemas como visión borrosa y fatiga, problemas de postura y quita el tiempo de actividad física, que es aconsejado principalmente a los niños.
La evolución de la tecnología prueba que es sin duda, indispensable. Y la cantidad de niños que siguen su vida direccionados a las tecnologías es muy alta. Esta nos muestra que es importante invertir en las tecnologías. Sin embargo, es necesario que ambos los niños y sus padres o tutores, busquen el punto medio entre el uso y abuso de la tecnología, haciendo con que pasen un buen rato al mismo tiempo que velan por su salud.

Word Count: 418
Grade 7 (25/25)
L-10
M-10
F-5

How can you develop this even more? Add more idioms/ fancy grammar E.g: new subjunctives

“Mucha gente dice que la telerrealidad ofrece una mala imagen de la sociedad y del comportamiento humano”




La mayoría de las personas en España afirman que la telerrealidad envía un mensaje errada sobre el mundo y las personas. Haciendo con que las personas no se contenten con su aspecto, personalidad y sean confrontadas con cenas de violencia o sexo de una forma casual, de forma a que su percepción del mundo cambie sin que se deán cuenta. Al final, ¿cuál es el objetivo de la televisión? ¿Será que la televisión es una ventana para el Mundo y la realidad que le rodea o una ventana para su propia realidad? Antiguamente no había tantos programas de telerrealidad, la tv era basada en programas de información o programas documentales. Más y más personas se están cuestionando sobre el contenido de la tv hoy en día.

 

Algunos ejemplos de la telerrealidad en España son: Gran Hermano, Supervivientes o Perdidos en la Tribu, Confianza Ciega…entre otros. En Inglaterra hay otros iguales o similares como el Big Brother, Survivor, Kardashians, etc.



Hoy en día hay muchos formatos de telerrealidad: reality shows, cotilleos, programas de corazón, series…el problema con el crecimiento de este género de programas es que la tele está al alcance de toda la gente de todas las edades, por eso no hay como evitar alguien de ver estos programas. Las consecuencias que pueden ocurrir entre los niños pueden ser irreversibles, visto que los niños tienden a imitar todo lo que ven, provocando una perca de personalidad y una diminución de diversidad. Las insinuaciones sexuales, el malo comportamiento y los comentarios poco inteligentes presenten en la mayoría de los programas de telerrealidad tienen efectos negativos en la criminalidad: el crimen y los actos de violencia han aumentado y muchas personas apuntan lo dedo a la telerrealidad. Su ética también es dudosa y no parece ser cohesiva, criando muchas peleas y argumentos.



Sin embargo, los que creen que la telerrealidad trae cosas positivas dicen que estos programas son una forma de estudiar las relaciones personales y aumentar nuestro conocimiento sobre la sociedad. En algunos países, ver la telerrealidad es una actividad en familia, por lo tanto es un momento de socialización y tópico de muchas conversas, incentivando la socialización. Se espera un aumento en la convivencia en frente a la tele de 35% en el espacio de 20 años, en España. Otros también afirman que programas de telerrealidad como el “Yorkshire” son educativos y ofrecen gran conocimiento, expendiendo el aprendizaje de personas de todas las edades, sexo y nacionalidad.

 

Esto demuestra que la telerrealidad es todavía un tema polémico aunque haya poco a hacer, visto que las personas con influencia en la media son las únicas con el poder de decisión. Desde mi punto de vista, la telerrealidad es una pérdida de tiempo. Este género de programas ha venido a moldar nuestra sociedad con el pasar de los tiempos y tiene de ser contenida o controlada de alguna forma para que no se degrade aún más. Yo espero que en el futuro los medios de comunicación sean más cuidadosos y piensen en las consecuencias de la telerrealidad, de esta forma la sociedad podrá tener un comportamiento adecuado y la imagen de la sociedad no será desmoralizada. En conclusión, estoy de acuerdo con los 30 millones de personas que creen en desalentar los programas de telerrealidad. 
 
 
 

Word Count: 550
Grade: 6